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02.10
Put Some Rhythm in Your Speech
By Terrance Malkinson
Aristotle the ancient Greek
philosopher and orator once said that there are
three ways in which you can persuade people to
your way of thinking. You can persuade people if
you appeal to them logically with factual data,
you can persuade people if you appeal to them by
being emotionally likable, and you can persuade
people if the audience believes you to be a
credible person.
There are many nuances
associated with speech. One of the most
important of which is the choice of words and
phrases and delivering them in a manner that
makes them pleasant to the receivers’ ear. One
element necessary for a majestic speech is its
rhythm or cadence. Establishing the right
rhythm will send a forceful message that
listeners will attend to and comment that they
“could not have said it better themselves.”
As discussed by Bruce Boston,
the basic and natural rhythm of English is found
in the simple declarative sentence from which
simple variations called the double and the
triple may be composed.
Examples of which we are all
familiar of high impact simple declarative
sentences include:
“I have a dream”
(Martin Luther King)
“But let us begin”
(John F. Kennedy)
The opening line of Kennedy’s
inaugural address provides an example of a set
of three sets of doubles that provide the basic
rhythm that extends throughout his speech:
“We observe today
not a victory of a party,
but a declaration of freedom –
symbolizing an end as
well as a beginning,
signifying renewal as
well as change.”
Bruce Boston goes on to describe
how elements can be added to extend the cadence,
change the pace, and drive the speakers point to
the audience as in the following use of the
triple in Winston Churchill’s speech following
Dunkirk:
“We shall go on to the
end, we shall fight in France, we shall
fight on the seas and oceans, we shall fight
with growing confidence and strength in the
air, we shall defend our island, whatever
the cost may be, we shall fight on the
beaches, we shall fight in the fields and in
the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we
shall never surrender.”
Look to the historical examples
of recognized oratories of excellence as models
for yourself to follow when you are asked to
compose a speech.
For further information
Boston, Bruce, "Cadence:
The Key to Effective Speech Writing," IEEE
Transactions on Professional Communication,
30(4):227-228, 1987.
The Greatest Speeches of all
Time, Jerden Records, SoundWorks, USA, JRCD
7700, 1996.
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Terrance Malkinson is a
communications specialist, business analyst and
futurist. He is Vice-Chair of the IEEE-USA
Communications Committee, an international
correspondent for IEEE-USA Today's Engineer
, editor-in-chief of IEEE-USA Today's
Engineer Digest, associate editor for
IEEE Canadian Review, and a member of the
editorial advisory board of IEEE The
Institute. He was an elected Senator of the
University of Calgary and an elected Governor of
the IEEE Engineering Management Society as well
as an elected Administrative Committee member of
the IEEE Professional Communication Society. He
has been the editor of several IEEE conference
proceedings, and past editor of IEEE
Engineering Management. He is the author of
more than 385 publications, and is an
accomplished triathlete. His career path
includes being an accomplished technical
supervisor and medical researcher at the
University of Calgary a business proposal
manager for the General Electric Company, an
associate for Sears Canada Inc. and research
administrator with the School of Health and
Public Safety/Applied Research and Innovation
Services at SAIT Polytechnic in Calgary Canada.
The author is grateful to the
professional support of the Haskayne School of
Business Library at the University of Calgary.
He can be reached at
todaysengineer@ieee.org.
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